Wednesday, 19 March 2014

The Little Red Hen


a little red hen found a wheat seed she decided to plant it she asked a cat a fox and a pig to help her 
i cant help said the cat
im to busy answered the fox
ive got two much to do replied the pig
the little red hen dug a hole she dropped the seed into it she cover it the seed grow into a fine stalk of wheat the little red hen reaped the wheat she grinded it into flower she mixed this with water in a bowl and made dough she put this into a baking dish she put the dish into the oven when the loaf was baked she didnt share the bread with the cat fox and a pig she and her chick eat it they asked her how it tasted she told them that it was delicious

A little red hen found a wheat seed. She decided to plant it. She asked a cat, a fox and a pig to help her. "I can't help" said the cat.
"I'm too busy" answered the fox.
"I've got too much to do" replied the pig.

The little red hen dug a hole, she dropped the seed into it, she cover it. The seed grow into a fine stalk of wheat. The little red hen reaped the wheat. She grinded it into flower. She mixed this with water in a bowl and made dough. She put this into a baking dish, she put the dish into the oven. When the loaf was baked she didn't share the bread with the cat, fox and pig. She and her chick eat it. They asked her how it tasted. She told them that it was delicious.



1 comment:

  1. You found all of the errors. The only think you missed is the comma inside the speech marks before the tag line.

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