Rhyme
There is no rhyming in this poem.
Rhythm
There is three or four syllables in this poem.
Tone or mood
Mystifying
Personification
'at the river mouth'
river is not a live creature so it can't have a mouth.
Enjambment
It has got five lines and it is not in one line even though it is one sentence altogether.
Meaning of the title
'AWA'
Awa means a river.
3 facts about the author
He works at the schools in New Zealand.
He lived in a place called Oamaru which is in New Zealand.
He is a New Zealander.
My Poem
Tiaki
Their respect of me
smaller than a hole of a needle
I can't breath
I can't move
It's not juve
I'm getting closer to the death.
Excellent poetry analysis. Your poem really made me think, so I thought it was great. I was wondering, what does juve mean? And, what does tiaki mean?
ReplyDeleteJuve means energy and tiaki means to guard something or protect something.
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